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34 lines
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# Bad Examples: casual-opinion
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1. > I think the previous primary colour had merit, but perhaps it should be applied more selectively across the interface.
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Fails because it sounds edited. "The old primary colour was fine" is the voice.
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2. > This pull request appears to be low risk because the changes are additive and reversible.
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Fails because it removes the thinking-out-loud rhythm.
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3. > The current visual direction is promising, although some spacing refinements would improve the presentation.
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Fails because it sands off "it's a bit rough".
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4. > Why not use the Timescale container rather than this unconventional setup?
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Fails because "this weird shit" carries the actual reaction.
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5. > The stack tags may be adding unnecessary visual noise to the index page.
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Fails because "It's just cluttering up the ui" is more direct.
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6. > The lighting treatment is not visually successful.
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Fails because it is too art-director polished for "they don't look good at all".
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7. > These checks may not be giving us the level of confidence we need.
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Fails because the original judgement is sharper: "these checks seem really shitty".
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8. > Please avoid restating my point and instead provide a synthesis.
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Fails because the source is intentionally sharper: "don't just repeat my shit".
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